Post by account_disabled on Feb 18, 2024 22:47:55 GMT -5
That being said it’s 2013. Why are we having language selections as a landing page anymore? With a few lines of code you can find a user’s location and select the language for them. In this case if the user is in Quebec set French as the default. Anywhere else? Set English. Then make it obvious how to switch languages on any page on the website. 8. PR Web PR Web Landing Page 1. What are these images in the banner? What does the banner have to do with 14 ideas to promote my business? I’m guessing it’s talking about content creation.
Better yet, scrap the images and boost the size of the headline. 2. Connect Buy TG Database with me The copy isn’t terrible, but I’d like to see a better connection with the reader. “This guide is full of ideas like:” can easily be changed to “With this guide you will learn how to:” See what I did there? Now the user is directly linked to what benefit the guide will give them. 3. Optin Form woes This form looks overly complicated. Are they telling me there are NO required fields? Or is it that all of them are required? Keep it simple stupid! I would try eliminating the fat in this form. Pull out the annual revenue field.
Lose the password and the explanation about “How you will sign into your account”. Nowhere on this page does it tell me that I’m signing up for an account, so why are you forcing me into it? Ask for the password on the next screen to get people to sign up right before giving them their download. 4. Give me some reason to fill out the form There needs to be a benefit in the optin form. Instead of “Complete the Form to Download your Free Guide” try this: Complete the form below and discover 14 lucrative ways to promote your business online.
Better yet, scrap the images and boost the size of the headline. 2. Connect Buy TG Database with me The copy isn’t terrible, but I’d like to see a better connection with the reader. “This guide is full of ideas like:” can easily be changed to “With this guide you will learn how to:” See what I did there? Now the user is directly linked to what benefit the guide will give them. 3. Optin Form woes This form looks overly complicated. Are they telling me there are NO required fields? Or is it that all of them are required? Keep it simple stupid! I would try eliminating the fat in this form. Pull out the annual revenue field.
Lose the password and the explanation about “How you will sign into your account”. Nowhere on this page does it tell me that I’m signing up for an account, so why are you forcing me into it? Ask for the password on the next screen to get people to sign up right before giving them their download. 4. Give me some reason to fill out the form There needs to be a benefit in the optin form. Instead of “Complete the Form to Download your Free Guide” try this: Complete the form below and discover 14 lucrative ways to promote your business online.